Last Battle

Monday, October 8, 2007

Hi all,

Just a few things to share before you take on the paper tomorrow.

SBQ

1. Inference
a. Always use your own words for inference;
b. You can quote directly from the source for evidence;
c. Give 2 inferences (3 if you want to be safe)
d. 2-3 paragraphs
e.g.
Source A tells me that the atomic bomb had had destructive impact on Hiroshima. This can be supported by the burning buildings, collapsed lamp posts and debris all over the place.

In addition, Source A tells me that the atomic bomb had killed and injured many. This can be supported by buried bodies under the rubbles and an injured mother carrying her child who is burnt by the effects of the bomb.

2. Why?
a. Same as inference;
b. Third p// must be on purpose. Do it this way: e.g. The source is addressed to the villagers. The communist’s purpose was to convince the villagers that British were bad rulers so that they would not support the British and joined them instead.
c. 3-4 paragraphs
e.g.
The British created this poster because they wanted to portray the communists as dangerous and unpredictable. This can be supported by the poster that shows the dog representing the communists biting its owner.

The British also created this poster to show that the communists could be greedy and lack humanity. As the dog the communists know no kindness and do not know when to stop taking from people.

Lastly, the British created this poster to address to the mass public that the communists were unreliable and should be avoided at all costs. The British purpose is to warn them about the communists so that they would not support or provide for the communists.

3. Comparison
a. Always have a point of comparison;
b. Always have one difference and one similarity (both supported);
c. Last p//, be on difference or similarity on purpose/tone.
d. 3 paragraphs.

e.g.
Sources B and C are different as they disagree on the treatment of new villagers. Source B states that new villagers were well treated as they were introduced to a new range of social services such as ‘after care’ which people could have access to better healthcare. Source D says that people were badly treated as they were forced to move as the British would burn down their houses.

However, both sources are similar as they agree that the British were responsible for the evacuation of villagers to new ones for fight against communism. Source B says that the British had ‘planned for this to be a huge advantage for them in their fight against the communists.’ Source C says that the British army use the tactic of burning villages to ground and forcing people to move so that the communists could do nothing about it.

Lastly, both sources are different in purpose. The purpose of Source B is to educate and inform the people about the government’s action of relocating them to new villages. This is encourage more people to move so that the communists would not have access to these people. In contrast, the purpose of Source C is to dissuade the people from relocating and accuse the British of terrorizing the people. By doing so, Chin Peng hoped to blame the British for the plight of the people so that he could put the communists in good light even after so many years.


4. Reliability
a. Start by stating whether it is reliable or not based on source content;
b. Always have 2 cross-references supported with evidence;
c. Last p//, reliable or unreliable based on who says it? Why? Purpose? Audience? Intended impact?
d. 4 paragraphs
e.g.
Source C is not reliable in what it says about the British. Source C states that the British had used brutal means to move people into new villages. According to Source C, it says that British would burn peoples’ houses and insisted that they moved.

However, when I cross-referenced with Source B, states that the British did not use brutal means at all. They provided them with special services and improvements such as irrigation and drainage programmes for the people. Hence, Source B disagrees with Source C.

Lastly, Source C is spoken by Chin Peng, the ex-leader of the MCP and his purpose was to convince people that the British were responsible for the hardships of the people and the communists were innocent. This was said so that the people would not blame the MCP for the troubles in the past.

Note: The example provided only has one cross-reference, for the exam, pls have two cross-references.

SEQ

1. Remember for 4 marks, 2 pts 2 explanations or examples.
2. For 7 marks, show both sides. Elaborate more on both sides.

e.g. Why was Singapore chosen by Raffles? (4m)
1. Firstly, Singapore was chosen by Raffles for his new settlement site because of its superior geographic location. Singapore lies on the main trade route between China and India and hence it would be a good meeting points for traders all around.

Secondly, Singapore was free of Dutch control. This meant that the British would not have to challenge the Dutch directly and the British would only have to convince the local leaders to let the British set up a new settlement.

Note: The above is for 4 marks question. Do not write too much explanation or examples. Do not write extra points too. You may be wasting time in that
sense.


2. The fall of Singapore in 1942 was a complete success for the Japanese. HFDYA? EYA.

I disagree that the fall of Singapore was a complete success for the Japanese .

The Japanese achieved a brilliant victory in all aspects. Not only had they managed to defeat the British, but they had also destroyed the two famous battleships of the British thereby asserting their superiority. Besides that most of the Europeans were so terrified that they ran away for their lives. The British who all along had been invincible in battle had been dealt a devastating blow by the Japanese in such a quick time and with minimum casualty on the Japanese sides. Thus it is indeed a qualified success on the part of the Japanese.

However, it should also be born in mind that the Japanese were successful only from a military perspective. While the victory over Singapore was won, yet it was another matter in capturing the hearts and minds of the people. The Japanese were feared and hated by the local people so much and they were secretly despised. Furthermore the Japanese also mismanaged the economy and there was a shortage of essential commodities like food, clothing, medicine and other stuff. Furthermore there was uncontrolled inflation and the people’s lives were more miserable than during the British. Thus it would be incorrect to say that the fall of Singapore was a complete success for the Japanese.

In conclusion, it would be incorrect to assume that the fall of Singapore was a total success for the Japanese. While it was indeed true that from a military perspective it was a success yet it was severe failure from all other aspects. In terms of the economy, in terms of freedom, and in terms of happiness the Japanese occupation was far from success. The fact that even today the Japanese occupation is remembered as the days of darkness stands as testimony to the fact that the Japanese Occupation of Singapore was not a success.

Note: For 7 marks, to play safe write more to substantiate your point. If unsure and time permits, write an extra point with elaboration.

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Posted by Leo at 4:47 PM  

18 comments:

sir, do yo have all three paper's answer??

Anonymous said...
October 8, 2007 at 5:35 PM  

lolz that looks like a world war...

Anonymous said...
October 8, 2007 at 6:41 PM  

yea, its either u make it or die...

Redosmium said...
October 8, 2007 at 7:06 PM  

wow dis is very gd.. u wont find this in india

Aneh

Anonymous said...
October 8, 2007 at 8:33 PM  

good luck to everyone for the exams. thanks for the last-min info.

Anonymous said...
October 8, 2007 at 8:47 PM  

Atomic Bomb

1. Source A tells me that the atomic bomb had had destructive impact on Hiroshima. This can be supported by the burning buildings, collapsed lamp posts and debris all over the place.

In addition, Source A tells me that the atomic bomb had killed and injured many. This can be supported by buried bodies under the rubbles and an injured mother carrying her child who is burnt by the effects of the bomb.


2. Source C and Source D are different as they disagree on whether the bomb should be used. Source C says that the bomb should be used so as to ‘shorten the agony of young Americans’ as Japan had yet to surrender. In contrast, Source D says that the bomb should not be used as it says that Japan was already defeated and on the verge of surrendering. By using the bomb, Source D says that they would be like ‘barbarians of Dark Ages’ – one that kill women and children.

However, both sources are similar as they agree on the destructive impact of the bomb. Source C says that the bomb is capable of ‘tragic consequence’. Source D says that the bomb is a ‘horrible weapon’ that would kill many innocents.

Lastly, Source C and D are different in purpose as Source C is a radio broadcast by Harry Truman after the bombing and his intended audience was the entire population of America and even other parts of the world. His purpose was to justify to them the use of nuclear weapon on Japan so that people would support his action as he knew that the bomb would cause huge suffering. The purpose of Source D was to tell people that America should not have resorted to the use of the bomb due to its devastating effect. As a reflection, the source could also be said to distant the speaker away from such an act of barbarism.

3. Source D is reliable in presenting that the bomb should not be dropped because it would take away many lives including that of women and children. This is true when I cross-reference with Source A as it shows that many lives are lost, properties destroyed and the victims do include women and children.

However, Source D is not very reliable in telling me that the bomb should not be dropped because when I cross-reference with Source B, Source B says that once when the bomb was dropped the soldiers were all so happy that they did not have to invade Japan and this meant that they would not have to risk their lives and could go on living till adulthood.

Source D is also not reliable because when I cross-reference with Source C, it disagrees with D as it says that the bomb should be dropped against a country like Japan who had been responsible for the many woes of America. The bomb had to be used to ‘shorten the agony of young Americans.’

Lastly, the source is not so reliable as it is from the America Chief of Staff after the atomic bombing. In this case, his opinion could not be representative of all as he based his own opinion on his ‘own feelings’. As a Chief of Staff, he also had his own ideas of how a war should be fought. Therefore, his view is not reliable in telling us why the atomic bombs should not be dropped.

Note: I have changed the qn c to a 'how reliable...' qn.

This is the one for merger:

a. Source A tells me that merger was a happy occasion and all leaders were satisfied with what they achieved. This can be supported by the poster that shows four leaders joining hands and smiling.

Source A also tells me that merger was a theatrical act by all the leaders as they were simply putting up a show to entertain people. This can be supported by a small creature that says that merger was an MGM production. This could mean that merger itself could be insincere, not well meaning and perhaps a marriage of convenience.

c. Source C is not very reliable in explaining why Malaysia wanted to kick Singapore out as it says that since Singapore was of no use to Malaysia anymore after Malaysia had got rid of the communist problem.

This is not true when I cross reference with Source B that says that Singapore was kicked out because Malaysia’s UNMO would not want to be investigated and accused of being responsible for the racial riot that took place. If investigation had been carried out, UMNO would be accused of instigating the racial riot and this might embarrass the Tunku. Hence, Singapore was told to leave.

In addition, Source C is not reliable because it is said by a high official in Malaysia. Speaking from the government’s point of view, his view would be biased towards the Malaysia and only protect the Malaysia’s reputation. His purpose was to evade the issue of racial riot so that people would not suspect UMNO and their role in the riot which led to the break up.

Note: I have also changed this qn to 'how relaible..' too.

Leo said...
October 8, 2007 at 8:58 PM  

wow, Mr Leo, you really are the most hardworking teacher.....thanks!

Anonymous said...
October 8, 2007 at 10:10 PM  

Mr Leo definitely deserves credit for all the effort he has put in thus far.

Anonymous said...
October 8, 2007 at 10:19 PM  

yeah...

Anonymous said...
October 9, 2007 at 7:45 PM  

de exam was rather easy... thanks mr leo for all the help u gave us...

ahmad

Anonymous said...
October 9, 2007 at 9:07 PM  

thnx mr leo the blog helped me a lot :)

Anonymous said...
October 10, 2007 at 12:31 PM  

Yeah thanks mr leo!! Easy but cannot complete it!!

Anonymous said...
October 10, 2007 at 5:06 PM  

Mr leo, mark lenient lenient can?

Anonymous said...
October 10, 2007 at 10:00 PM  

oi mark linient might as well giv full marks rite??? u write lousy dun anyhow ask teachers to mark linient la...

ahmad

Anonymous said...
October 10, 2007 at 11:47 PM  

You are all welcome!!!

It's a department effort.

Credit to all the other teachers too. Mr Khoo, Ms Sheika, Ms Reny and my aneh friend Mdm Thiru.

Cheers and Selamat Hari Raya.

Leo

Leo said...
October 11, 2007 at 7:48 AM  

haha mdm thiru??? and selamat hari raya to evry1 too...

ahmad

Anonymous said...
October 11, 2007 at 2:33 PM  

hey mr leo i suggest u post up a conclusion post to sum up this years history module

ahmad

Anonymous said...
October 11, 2007 at 7:56 PM  

THanks Ahmad! Will do one to sum up everything.

Leo

Leo said...
October 12, 2007 at 9:55 AM  

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